APCW, while appreciate you posting the draft of the email, there were a couple of things troubling me, besides starting any correspondence with *I* and the typo (and yes, in my book people lose credibility, too, when they don't know the rules of it's and its). Goodlatte is NOT a constituent of the Rep we are emailing to. Furthermore, "the real issue here is MONEY... everything else is smoke and mirrors to support Goodlatte's pursuit of this money" is just DEAD WRONG. If he were to legalize and regulate it, a lot of money would be flowing into US coffers (Vegas casinos and taxing authorities) and Goodlatte would get lots of campaign donations and other perks offered by the Vegas casinos.
Here's my draft and i hope you don't mind i borrowed a couple of expressions/comments from you:
Dear Rep. ________________,
The purpose of this email is to express my strong disagreement with
bill HR 4777, introduced by Rep. Bob Goodlatte. In order to push his
own moral agenda, Rep. Goodlatte distorts the facts and seriously
overstates the risks of money laundering and underage online gambling.
Passage of this bill would constitute censorship and a tragic violation
of our right to freedom of speech. Therefore, any US citizen, whether
he/she gambles online or not, should be strongly opposed to yet another
attempt to curtail our rights.
Online gambling has grown to a $12 billion industry. Such growth
reflects the popularity worldwide resulting from the ability to play a
game of poker or some slot machines in the comfort and safety of one's
own home. This industry regulates itself and does not allow underage
gamblers. It is likely that some incidents of money laundering and
underage gamblers periodically do occur nonetheless. However,it is
senseless to deny millions of people a simple pleasure because of a few
who manage to break the rules. It would be just as absurd to forbid ALL
internet access to everyone because of the presence of spammers and
hackers. And i suspect the spammers and hackers greatly outnumber the
money launderers and underage online gamblers, not just in numbers but
also in terms of cost to society!
In the United Kingdom the online gaming industry is LEGAL and
REGULATED. And what better way to control potential risks than
regulating an industry? It is that approach that the United States
should follow. We only have to look back at Prohibition to realize that
forbidding a popular activity will not work and will only result in
increased criminal activity. Legalizing and regulating, on the other
hand, would provide new sources of revenue for US businesses and
additional revenues for local, state, and federal taxing authorities.
The significant tax revenues reaped from that other popular gambling
activity, i am speaking of state lotteries, attest to this.
I can ensure you that there will be an enormous outcry by the American
people - by those who engage in online gambling and by those who do not -
if this proposed bill were to pass. I am holding you responsible to
make my voice, and that of millions of other Americans, heard on this!